Re-read and wonder at the language process…

I re-read the elements of chapter zero the other day and found mucho mistakes in the writing style and grammar. Obviously this was corrected, but it got me thinking about the process I use to write.

For me at least, it’s interesting to watch the evolution of a piece of text. First, it starts out like a new bar of soap, all hard and sharp around the edges. Then as I use it, it starts to become softer and smoother. So I put the analogy to use in my writing and I keep reading and revising the words, taking off the rough edges, smoothing the feel of the dialog and descriptions. The real art to editing of course, is knowing when to stop.

My editor always tells me the most important thing about writing is to get it down on paper first. Then at least you have something to work with. It may not translate exactly as you had hoped, but then again, it’s something you can work on. A bit of massaging her and there, an alteration in the order or context and hey presto it is as my mind originally thought about it, or close to…which ever came first.

This takes me nicely to the next topic…which is,

How many of us have wondered where the words come from in our mind?

This whole process of thinking, let alone the complex issues regarding the translation of the words from thought to sound is a huge subject in and of its own right. For the last few years, I have often wondered what makes thoughts turn from a complex construct into something I can communicate to another person. This all happens very fast as we think of something and translate it into sounds, we never take time out to wonder at the process. These words carry more than just a simple sound wave, they carry immense amounts of additional information, some on a subconscious level and some mixed in body language.

For instance, does a cat’s meow have subtle nuances we are unaware of, that convey more than just an actual sound to another cat. Put aside for the moment that body language plays a large part in this, as it has been shown that even without seeing the body language, it is still possible to convey much information with just sound itself.

Language and communications on their basic level are about expressing ideas, but then again where do the ideas come from? As a writer, I have a great deal of time to get the dialog into a form that feels natural and right. As a speaker who adlib’s, they do not have that luxury and so they work on a different level.

So what are your thoughts on the matter of speech and how we are to communicate?

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The changing colours of Lake District.

I have decided to add some of my other writings to this blog, so here goes.

Having never visited the Lake District, I was in for more of a treat than I could have imagined. As I sat in the passenger seat at the end of another glorious day, I gazed out across Thirlmere lake and wondered at the magnificence of the view. The evening colours that graced the sky, layered subtle hints on the surrounding countryside and water reminiscent of a summer’s evening in the Swiss alps.

Here in front of me was a view that showed all the grace and beauty of nature at its best. I could have been forgiven for thinking that it was not our fair and pleasant land, but somewhere more grandiose. But this would be to do a disservice to this small part of England. It is hard not to look at this special place without feeling moved by the sheer scale of the awe inspiring views that greet the eyes at every turn.

Earlier that day I had been going towards Kirkstone Pass, and the mist had given the whole valley a Chinese flavour and then, as I travelled back to the cottage that evening, the countryside had revealed yet another facet to its catalogue of holiday look alike destinations, namely somewhere in Canada.

I had always wanted to go to the Lake District; but something always got in the way. If it was not the car that needed a service, then it was lack of funds in the bank. I was fortunate, therefore, that a friend offered me a chance to accompany them. As I was driven from one location to the next, I felt like repeatedly getting out of the car and kicking myself for not making time to discover this gem of England sooner.

Day 1.

We travelled on Friday for a three-day break and managed to get there by early afternoon. Even though the weather forecast had been none too promising, the sun was still shining as we headed out to Derwent Water and took a look around. The lake surrounded by large hills and mountains, had all the hallmarks of scenes found atop a Swiss chocolate box. Unlike parts of Dorset that have a Lillyput village feel to them, it is hard to pin down exactly what makes towns like Keswick and Derwent so appealing. Everything is chaotically organised, as though it was planned to look that way, whilst somehow managing to still appear organic in its evolution. One thing that I did feel was a bit tiring after a while, was the profusion of mountain-sports shops, endless cafes and art galleries. How many does one town need? However, this is a very small niggle.

We decided to take a trip through Honiston Pass, a sharp, rugged and unforgiving valley that had a bleak and austere beauty. I stopped off and climbed one of the slopes to get a better view of the area, and was immediately struck by the scale of the landscape. With the day closing in, we returned to the cottage where the only thing that ruined the rural atmosphere was a large wind turbine poking up from the hill.

Day 2.

The weather started out well, for a late April morning, and initially showed no signs of closing in. As we travelled out, you could see signs of straining weather patterns in the sky. This did nothing to detract from the views to be had in the Lake District, and in many cases I found that looming storms gave a whole new atmosphere, again with an oriental flavour. Taking a different route we made our way towards Kirkstone Pass, at which point the weather showed how unforgiving it could really be. The heavens opened and it seemed as if a celestial hand had poured one of the nearby lakes through a sieve. This made no difference to me in the car, but I can’t speak for the walkers who were wending their way down the Pass. Coming over the brow of the hill at the top of the pass, a sharp break in the clouds signified a change in the weather that was to bring with it improved skies and warmer climes.

We made our way down ‘The Struggle’ and came out into brighter conditions and lots of glorious sunlight. The town of Ambleside is a strange mix of cafés, art galleries, old world buildings and camping shops. But even with this eclectic mix of architecture there is something for everyone to see. Look down any alley off the main street, or up at the second floor of many of the buildings and you’ll see what I mean. When you have had your break from the incredible scenery, don’t worry, within a couple of minutes of leaving the town you’ll be immersed in it once again.

The return trip took us past Thirlmere lake, and through a valley that was atmospherically like Austria. As the sun slipped down over hill on the other side of the lake, the tree line ignited with an orange fiery glow; one thing you can’t accuse the Lake District of is subtle colours. Further down the valley, the mists and evening clouds swirled round the peak of a distant mountain. Even after the sun had been down for half an hour the last vestiges of the light still managed to make a nearby peak glow with the dying rays of the day.

Day 3.

This was the last day of our break and I wanted to do something a little different. Over the last two days I had driven past the multitude of hills and peaks that beckoned me from afar. Today I was going to climb something, but not having been here before, I drove through the countryside looking for a likely target, which was not difficult, I was spoilt for choice. Luck was clearly on my side as the rain held off providing the perfect weather for climbing with cool breezes, sunshine and the odd passing cloud. Being a time of year that is notorious for bad weather, I was clearly in the minority of people who wished to climb. I met very few on the ascent and had a clear run on the return journey.

I made my way up ‘Ullock Pike’, along the ridge known as ‘Longside’ and finally a steepish ascent up ‘Skiddaw’ to the summit of what I later found out was the fourth highest mountain in England. At the peak, I got a clear unobstructed view of the entire Lake District, with the distant mountains of Scotland and fleeting glimpses of Ireland through the far-off evening clouds.

Climbing might have tested my lungs, but the descent put my calf muscles and ankles through the wringer. By the time I reached the car I was tired and shaky, but also very happy, having climbed my first proper mountain. Later, I drove back on the M6 and reflected on my first visit to this unique and beautiful part of England that I had for so long neglected. With the sun setting and giving way to night, I drove into the darkness on my long trip back home. I was already planning my next trip.

 

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Without the land, what are we…

Been a few days since my last update as I have been getting some photography bits and pieces sorted. Now I am back to the book so here goes…

I have during the odd few hours here and there been writing bits of Chapter 0. It is interesting how things work out. I have added a stronger connection to the Aboriginal Dreaming and Dreamtime stories, which adds some extra fodder for the story. With that came quite a lot of reading about the stories that I could find on the internet.

The more I have read about it, the more I come to understand the connection between the Aborigines and the Land. It is not just a story to them, but something far more. As one Aborigine said, the hills are part of what makes up who we are and the stories we tell, take away the hills and suddenly the stories have no meaning.

I am kind of scratching the surface with what he meant, their whole culture, language, the land and the Dreamtime stories are so tightly interwoven. It’s amazing how much sense they all make when you listen to them, not as entertainment, but as a whole package. I personally would love to visit some of the places I talk about in my book, and then to visit the people and listen to them first hand. Like the man said, without experiencing the land, there all just stories.

Another thing that has opened up a whole new line in the second book, has been the colourful metaphors they use to describe the Dreamtime stories we do hear. There is a maturity to the flow that feels much like a heavily used wooden banister. Even though it shows its age, you know that it has been moulded to be that way, over time; the rough edges having long since been smoothed off, not to mention the comfortable way it feels when you place your hand on it.

So taking some of that I have loosened up some of the characters in this books first chapter and hopefully it will show. I still have some editing of the beginning of the chapter to do, as the settings seem a bit forced, but it should not take too long

Oh well back to the writing and hopefully to be finished by the end of the week.

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Is it really 42 people who like the book already…Superb

According to Douglas Adams and the Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy, I have just reached the the number which will answer the ultimate question – and that is 42. Wicked.

I love the explanation in Wikipedia that tells us what 42 is. Get this….

42 (forty-two) is the natural number immediately following 41 and directly preceding 43.

Is that a fact…Sometimes I wonder why I get out of bed.

Book is coming along nicely, so I will update in the next couple of days. Had a superb idea on how I am going to marry the two diametrically opposed ideas of time together…

As the advert for Compare the Market says – “Simples”.

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Chapter 0 – The great unknown.

I have finally finished the seventh chapter and now I am going to re-read and edit it. The sixth chapter has been through the first draft edit, which means that at the moment, I have over a third of the book complete. I’ll have to do the Chapter Zero next, but in the mean time I intend to read about Aboriginal Australian folklore to see where I can fit the story.

I need to find one of their stories that talks about travellers from afar, or if that is not available, then something that can be adapted. The reason I need this as research is to make it sound plausible. If it is close to one of their stories of dreamtime or the ancient past with the magical stories of the Rainbow Serpent, etc. then it will sound all the better.

There is something mysterious about the stories, an almost tangible quality that might have been due to the fact that they are passed from generation to generation as a living memory. Until recently they were not written down, so everything they relate to the next generation is in memory. The fact that through hundreds of generations these stories have remained largely consistent is a testament to the myth behind the tale, and something I wish to capture in the book when I write it.

I don’t know why, but I have a deep affinity with the Aborginies, which is strange as I have never been to Australia or met a true indigenous native. I guess the closest I have got is the hand carved boomerang I have on the wall. But the more I read about how their culture worked and how they integrated themselves in with the lands around them, the more I feel there is something they could teach all of us – if only we would stop long enough to hear it.

There will be some research first and then I’ll start the narative. Roll on Chapter Zero and the rest of the book.

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